What if the fastest way to weaken your story’s impact is to stop trusting your audience?
In this episode of the podcast, Jake explores In the Blink of an Eye, the ambitious new sci-fi drama written by Colby Day and directed by Andrew Stanton. Premiering at Sundance and now streaming on Hulu, the film unfolds across three timelines—past, present, and future—each wrestling with the same question: how do human beings confront death in a constantly evolving universe?
The structure echoes Darren Aronofsky’s The Fountain, another film built around three interwoven stories exploring humanity’s struggles with mortality. That connection opens the door to a deeper craft conversation: how writers can take the structural DNA of a film they admire and transform it into something new.
From there, Jake digs into the beating heart of storytelling: theme. Theme is the glue that holds a screenplay together—but only when it’s discovered through the journey of the characters. When writers start explaining the theme instead of exploring it, the audience stops feeling it.
Finally, Jake tackles one of the most misunderstood elements of screenwriting: dialogue. Dialogue is not about language. Dialogue is about action. A point he illustrates through a scene with actual neanderthals. Because when dialogue becomes explanation for the audience instead of behavior between characters, even powerful moments lose their primal power.
By the end of the episode, you’ll see why trusting your audience is one of the most important—and most difficult—skills a writer can develop.
What We Cover:
- How to repurpose the structure of a movie you love without copying it
- Why theme only works when the writer is genuinely wrestling with it
- The real definition of dialogue: action, not explanation
- Why great films trust the audience to feel what the story is already showing
🎧 LISTEN NOW to learn how trusting your audience can sharpen your dialogue, deepen your theme, and make your story resonate.